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  • synthian.

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    This story... dude, it's really, really emotional. And I love the way you wrote it. The ending literally made me cry.
    October 28th, 2010 at 12:35pm
  • madstarz

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    this was a really good story. it made my cry, the last chapter made my cry :(
    September 22nd, 2010 at 03:50pm
  • itbemet

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    I have no words....too blown away. wow.
    August 18th, 2010 at 02:29am
  • kryptisk

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    wow. this story blew me away - I started crying when I read the last chapter. amazing, truly amazing story this is.
    August 8th, 2010 at 02:22pm
  • Toy Robot

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    Awww, wow. That was...sad. For want of a better word. I'll miss this story, can't believe the ending, especially the fact he didn't care that he killed her. :(
    August 5th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • ArielAdrenaline.

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    I bawled my eyes out on the last chapter, I really thought he'd have changed. D:
    But this story was so fucking amazing. I loved it<3
    August 4th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • Kelszillagatesa7x15

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    Okay I have to admit I almost cried at that last chapter.
    He didn't feel anything then, so there was no point in going back to him. Ha ha you made Brian such a horrible person! :p
    Over all I loved the story. I couldn't seem to stop and found myself asking questiosn when I wasn't reading it. I was sad when the story had to come to that ending, but there you characters lolz.
    August 1st, 2010 at 05:16pm
  • AyooBeautiful

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    Oh My Gosh THAT WAS AMAZING. It Had So Much Emotion In It. I Even Started Crying. Haha But I Can't Wait To Read Your New Story<3
    August 1st, 2010 at 07:17am
  • ZaynsterNightly

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    OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! i havent been on in forever, and look how much i missed!! i cant believe he killed her! after so long!!! omgomgomg.....wow its amazing gwen.....
    July 31st, 2010 at 03:33pm
  • Starlit

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    i'm so sad. i'm almost crying. why did you let her go back to brian. but other than her death it was fucking fantastic.
    July 30th, 2010 at 11:27am
  • Starlit

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    i'm so sad. i'm almost crying. why did you let her go back to brian. but other than her death it was fucking fantastic.
    July 30th, 2010 at 11:27am
  • Kelszillagatesa7x15

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    OH MY FREAKING GOD OK SO I HAVE BEEN READING THIS AND I THOUGHT I WOULD COMMENT AND I AM NOT YET FINISHED.
    I WANT TO PUNCH OR SCREAM AT EMMA!!!!! JUST FORGET ABOUT THE MAN AND MOVE ON GOSH!! Obviously she likes to be beaten...
    July 29th, 2010 at 01:27pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Congratulations for successfully making me bawl my eyes out!
    Amazing story!
    July 29th, 2010 at 07:59am
  • VampAngel77

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    Oh My GOSH!!!! I definitely did not see that coming at all :(
    Anyway, *applauds you*
    Congratulations on finishing such a wonderful story with a completely shocking ending. I'll miss this story, I really will
    July 29th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • MissMantle

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    I just gotta say, this story is really really REALLY good. I just read the first 17 chapters in a streak, although I am really tired. Can't read any more right now but will finish tomorrow. I have actually already cried many times through it... So very sad
    July 29th, 2010 at 12:14am
  • Random13

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    oh. my. gosh. That was so sad!! when it said that Brian had killed her my jaw dropped. But alas, still a good story. Going to miss it!
    July 28th, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • Quinn Daniels

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    crying!!! asldfja;sldkfa gah what a good sad ending
    July 28th, 2010 at 09:46pm
  • Lover.Dearest

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    What?!
    No!
    It can't ed like that! D':
    It should have been a happy ending where Brian was better and didn't hurt Emma anymore! D:
    Dude, Im almost crying here.
    YOU SUCK!
    BUT I LOVE YOU BECAUSE THIS STORY WAS INCREDIBLE.
    ARGHHH
    July 28th, 2010 at 08:31pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I really thought that Brian would change his ways and it looked like he did, but he was never really able to control his anger and ended up killing Emma.
    What makes me mad is that Brian didn't even look guilty for what he did to his wife.
    I loved this story from the very beginning..it had me in tears in some part and the edge of my seat in others. They emotion in it was so real and moving at the same time that it makes you just want to go into the story and save Emma from this abuse she's going through with Brian.
    You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read your next story. :)
    July 28th, 2010 at 06:47pm
  • Baiser De La Mort

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    Wow I thought he changed, I was really hoping
    for they're happy ending but I guess this ending really
    went best with everything. I feel bad for the kids tho, and it's
    heartbreaking that after everything brian doesn't seem to regret it.

    Great story overall I really loved it.
    <3
    July 28th, 2010 at 05:33pm