Awww, wow. That was...sad. For want of a better word. I'll miss this story, can't believe the ending, especially the fact he didn't care that he killed her. :(
Okay I have to admit I almost cried at that last chapter. He didn't feel anything then, so there was no point in going back to him. Ha ha you made Brian such a horrible person! :p Over all I loved the story. I couldn't seem to stop and found myself asking questiosn when I wasn't reading it. I was sad when the story had to come to that ending, but there you characters lolz.
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!! i havent been on in forever, and look how much i missed!! i cant believe he killed her! after so long!!! omgomgomg.....wow its amazing gwen.....
OH MY FREAKING GOD OK SO I HAVE BEEN READING THIS AND I THOUGHT I WOULD COMMENT AND I AM NOT YET FINISHED. I WANT TO PUNCH OR SCREAM AT EMMA!!!!! JUST FORGET ABOUT THE MAN AND MOVE ON GOSH!! Obviously she likes to be beaten...
Oh My GOSH!!!! I definitely did not see that coming at all :( Anyway, *applauds you* Congratulations on finishing such a wonderful story with a completely shocking ending. I'll miss this story, I really will
I just gotta say, this story is really really REALLY good. I just read the first 17 chapters in a streak, although I am really tired. Can't read any more right now but will finish tomorrow. I have actually already cried many times through it... So very sad
What?! No! It can't ed like that! D': It should have been a happy ending where Brian was better and didn't hurt Emma anymore! D: Dude, Im almost crying here. YOU SUCK! BUT I LOVE YOU BECAUSE THIS STORY WAS INCREDIBLE. ARGHHH
I really thought that Brian would change his ways and it looked like he did, but he was never really able to control his anger and ended up killing Emma. What makes me mad is that Brian didn't even look guilty for what he did to his wife. I loved this story from the very beginning..it had me in tears in some part and the edge of my seat in others. They emotion in it was so real and moving at the same time that it makes you just want to go into the story and save Emma from this abuse she's going through with Brian. You're an amazing writer and I can't wait to read your next story. :)
Wow I thought he changed, I was really hoping for they're happy ending but I guess this ending really went best with everything. I feel bad for the kids tho, and it's heartbreaking that after everything brian doesn't seem to regret it.