Maybe It's Not Meant To Be - Comments

Dear author, this is a great piece of literature. There were sentences that took my breath away like the ending did. This was drenched in emotion and I absolutely love it. :) Other than the start which could use more details and a few writing typos here and there, this was perfect. Well done at writing this. :)

Dear author, this is a great piece of literature. There were sentences that took my breath away like the ending did. This was drenched in emotion and I absolutely love it. :) Other than the start which could use more details and a few writing typos here and there, this was perfect. Well done at writing this. :)

.......you know when puppies look really sad? i think thats how everyone ends up looking and feeling when this story ends.
I mean, there were errors, and it began cliche and all- but the entire story was still your own and still very sweet and sad. It was heartbreaking and emotional. You probbaly could have worked on some better details and everything, but you still did a great job and I loved reading it!

I really feel sorry for Alex. This was really sad, and heart-breaking.
This was truly amazing!

That was so sad! It was very good, all the same though.
Thank you for entering this in my contest. I'll be sure to let you know when the judging period is over and the winners are announced.

Omg Diana yuh made me cry with chapter three..<3iluvit

Diana that was soo good.No Lie keep going<3

WOW that was amazing....AGAIN! lol You're an amazing writer =D

This story truly did make me cry. Brilliantly written and incredibly sad. Through the entire story you know you want them to be together, but you know it wont happen.

Fantastic job.

Haha, what a coincidence. I just chose randomly.

Michelle Ellis?! I know someone named Michelle Ellis...

Woah.

Aww that's a shame poor Alex :(
Is this a 3 shot ? :)
If so, I would like to read the rest xD
This is very good :)

Wow that was wow...so your making it three chapters. I look forward to the rest.