Temporary Life - Comments

NO! after all of it she has to die D:
thats just not fair at all

man i'm only up to chapter 29 but the fucking suspense.. gosh.. i mean like... theres still the rest for me to read. but this is fucking fantastic.

YOU KILLED HER?!?!?!
omg thats so sad
but dont worry wont kill you because it was an awesome story!!

WHAAAA???

i'm gone for a week or so and you manage to kill her?
Don't worry I won't kill you.
I'll just torture you.
Merciless.

Jk.
But great job. :) It's an awesome series.

The only second-generation A7X story I'll ever read. Not bad! I was honestly confused with some of the bands outside of the obvious, My Chem, All Time Low. Can't you make a glossary?! Dx And the pictures were a pain to scroll past, but obviously I made it to the end. OMG YOU KILLED HER!!!! People are so cruel nowadays. Yeah, if I have a kid someday I don't want to die and leave it behind- all you people quit tryin to jinx me! >.< Mhm yeah that means you too. Did you keep writing "purpose" instead of "propose"? You might not have, and it was some other story, but I'm not sure. Anyway keep writing

i didn't expect that ending

*Bawls unconsolably* Nooooooo! You can't kill Kels! :( But it was a really epic ending and as much as I hate it... I love it. Weird right? Ha. This was a great story and I'm really glad I got the chance to read it. :)

D: SHE DIED!? That was a total. What. The. Fuck. Moment.
Good job :D

DAMN!
I thought she was like a cat and had 9 lives left...
Let's see...she got shot, hurt herself, got into a car accident twice, lived with pyscho mom...that's all I can remember right now....
So she still had another four!

I feel sorry for Bam, I mean how would you feel if your wife died just after a fight. Last thing you heard .. "fuck you."

why did u have to kill her why & i agree with greenhampters676 sugestion

i would like to say u should continue this story from the kids point of view.

awww... did you have to make them fight? bam must feel horrible!
congrats...you made me cry Dx

this is an amazing story and im proud to say ive been with it from the beggining!

By the way
just found out I'm in trouble once again for screaming
but it was so worth it
even if you couldn't hear me

After everything we went through to save her
*tears streaming down face, loud sobbing*
you kill her
YOU KILLED HER!
I am very upset with you.

nice updates
but sooo sad
wow

Oh My God!
Noooooo!
That was so sad! :(

You killed her?!

Loved it thhouggh

YOU MONSTERR
You killed poor kelsi.
Ohh Brian is gonna kill Bamm
Awe Bam must feel horrible
D:
8 months after the wedding too.
D:
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so sadd