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  • Jody!

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    NO! after all of it she has to die D:
    thats just not fair at all
    January 2nd, 2014 at 10:24pm
  • MudbloodAngel

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    man i'm only up to chapter 29 but the fucking suspense.. gosh.. i mean like... theres still the rest for me to read. but this is fucking fantastic.
    December 13th, 2010 at 10:03am
  • musicXO

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    YOU KILLED HER?!?!?!
    omg thats so sad
    but dont worry wont kill you because it was an awesome story!!
    April 11th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • justhannah;

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    WHAAAA???

    i'm gone for a week or so and you manage to kill her?
    Don't worry I won't kill you.
    I'll just torture you.
    Merciless.

    Jk.
    But great job. :) It's an awesome series.
    April 10th, 2010 at 11:32am
  • celestial_royalty

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    The only second-generation A7X story I'll ever read. Not bad! I was honestly confused with some of the bands outside of the obvious, My Chem, All Time Low. Can't you make a glossary?! Dx And the pictures were a pain to scroll past, but obviously I made it to the end. OMG YOU KILLED HER!!!! People are so cruel nowadays. Yeah, if I have a kid someday I don't want to die and leave it behind- all you people quit tryin to jinx me! >.< Mhm yeah that means you too. Did you keep writing "purpose" instead of "propose"? You might not have, and it was some other story, but I'm not sure. Anyway keep writing
    April 7th, 2010 at 11:32am
  • a venom

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    i didn't expect that ending
    April 1st, 2010 at 04:21am
  • Foralwaysmydarling

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    *Bawls unconsolably* Nooooooo! You can't kill Kels! :( But it was a really epic ending and as much as I hate it... I love it. Weird right? Ha. This was a great story and I'm really glad I got the chance to read it. :)
    March 29th, 2010 at 06:22pm
  • xxSawa

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    D: SHE DIED!? That was a total. What. The. Fuck. Moment.
    Good job :D
    March 29th, 2010 at 08:59am
  • Angelwolf1993

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    DAMN!
    I thought she was like a cat and had 9 lives left...
    Let's see...she got shot, hurt herself, got into a car accident twice, lived with pyscho mom...that's all I can remember right now....
    So she still had another four!
    March 29th, 2010 at 06:03am
  • PeanutFoREVer.

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    I feel sorry for Bam, I mean how would you feel if your wife died just after a fight. Last thing you heard .. "fuck you."
    March 29th, 2010 at 05:43am
  • fallen_angel94

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    why did u have to kill her why & i agree with greenhampters676 sugestion
    March 29th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • greenhampters676

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    i would like to say u should continue this story from the kids point of view.
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • forever_free

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    awww... did you have to make them fight? bam must feel horrible!
    congrats...you made me cry Dx

    this is an amazing story and im proud to say ive been with it from the beggining!
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:25am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    By the way
    just found out I'm in trouble once again for screaming
    but it was so worth it
    even if you couldn't hear me
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:06am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    After everything we went through to save her
    *tears streaming down face, loud sobbing*
    you kill her
    YOU KILLED HER!
    I am very upset with you.
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:05am
  • rockchick

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    nice updates
    but sooo sad
    wow
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:59am
  • rebel.at.heart.

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    Oh My God!
    Noooooo!
    That was so sad! :(
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    You killed her?!
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:41am
  • Zacky Baker.

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    Loved it thhouggh
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • Zacky Baker.

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    YOU MONSTERR
    You killed poor kelsi.
    Ohh Brian is gonna kill Bamm
    Awe Bam must feel horrible
    D:
    8 months after the wedding too.
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    so sadd
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:36am
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