I'm so sorry to hear what happened to your friend; I hope it gets better for you. Nicely done and well expressed. There are two errors I thought I'd point out. :) 1. I lied.[/i[ - a little mess up with the "]" 2.but I ignored they're gazes. - Should be their gazes, not a contraction. Other than that it was done quite well and thanks for your entery. :D
Nicely done and well expressed.
There are two errors I thought I'd point out. :)
1. I lied.[/i[ - a little mess up with the "]"
2.but I ignored they're gazes. - Should be their gazes, not a contraction.
Other than that it was done quite well and thanks for your entery. :D