Loved the update! :D Hm... so I'm beginning to think Joe might be exagerrating when claiming Denise blames him for Kevin's death. Because I mean... judging by the way everyone else is acting, she doesn't seem to be that way at all. If anything, she just wants to see him again. Maybe Joe just thinks this because he really just blames himself and is looking for someone else to hate him for what he did. :( Either that or Denise displayed this side of her in front of him only. :/ Hm... and I'm starting to wonder about Jenna's intentions. Like, she tried apologizing, and even though it didn't work... she's still not leaving. Great update, though. Can't wait for more! :D
I loved the update!! I had to re-read the story to get caught up with it again. But I absolutely loved the update. :D Please update soon Jordan. I love stories about my Joseph. Lol.
Yay, another update! :D Loved the new chapter! :) Aww... you could tell how much Kevin meant to Joe in this chapter. :'( So sad. Also sad that he was blamed for his brother's death, too. What exactly happened, I wonder? And... did he really hear Kevin talking to him? And what did he mean when he said Joe had something to live for? I mean, Joe shouldn't do that to himself, but... did Kevin mean something in particular? Hm... and I assume that was Jenna in the end that he spotted. Well, she found him, like she wanted to. Can't wait to see what she has to say to him, though. Great job with the update! Can't wait for more! :D
Aw... so you wrote a chapter in the name stealer's point of view. ;P XD Aha, anyway... hm... so that's why she left Joe. But why would she do that? I mean, that's when he needed her more than ever and she just... told him it was over. :/ That makes me not like her character too much. :/ I mean, really. You could've approached it at a better time. But I suppose it's better than keep on going behind his back and cheating on him. Joe seems like he's changed, now, though. With Sam. But if Jenna comes back into the picture... that might change things. Oh no! :( I really hope it doesn't. Things were going so well with them, progressing and all. Great job with the update though. It was a bit of a surprise to see a different POV, but you let us in on a few secrets. And Kevin... aww... :( So sad. But can't wait for more of this, really. :)
Yay!!! You updated! I'm so happy and you were right, I had no idea that it was going to be in Jenna's point of view. :) I liked it a lot!! Amazing!! :DD
Yay, an update!! :D Loved the new chapter! It was actually posted sooner than I thought it was going to be. :P But loved the new chapter. Aw, it's cute how Joe took her to that secret place. I guess you can't blame Sam's thoughts when she thought he might rape her or something, I mean, she's had a rough life. :( But Joe would never do that. :) He's just an old-fashioned type of guy. Most of the time, anyway, seeing as he's been somewhat of a partier in this story. :P And Sam lived in Pennsylvania, that's awesome! Because that's where I am now! :D Aha. PA SHOUT-OUT!! XD Great update! It was very cute. :) Really can't wait for more! :D
Just finished chapter 12! UPDATE SOON! oh my goodness I love it! and its getting to a really good partt <3 and in chapter 11 when he burst out Samantha's name I slapped my hand over my mouth and busted out laughing hahahaha. :D
You've told me to read this story so many times and I never have until now because you brought it up in our texts today so I thought I would! and let me just say I'm only on chapter six and I'm LOVIN' it! Like I'm so captured in the story!(: I love your writing <3 I've told you this so many times but I DO :D
An update! *Applause*. :P lol. Just kidding. But seriously, I'm happy that you finally updated. :DD Hm... aw, so Joe and Samantha went on their first date together! How sweet! And it was at Taco Bell! :D lol. That just clarifies what an awesome first date that was. XD Hm... what all is Sam hiding? And why did Lewis warn Joe? What's all going on with Sam that Joe doesn't know about? :o So many questions. But great update! Very interesting. Can't wait for more! :D
Yay! You updated! :D Loved the new chapter! :) Aha, nice Joe; he made the name blub mistake. :P I don't blame Sierra for being mad, but hm... I'm wondering if that's the last we'll see of her? And I wonder what she's hiding? Aw, but I liked the end, because Joe got a date with Sam! :D lol. Overall, great update! Can't wait for more! :D
Yay, you updated! :D Loved the new chapter! :D Hm... so Joe has a date with Sierra? Can't wait to see how that goes. :P Hm... and Lewis and Samantha were once together? Interesting... hm... Can't wait for more! I really missed this story! :) I hope you update again soon! :D
It has been forever since you updated or since I read this. But I read it and as usual, I friggen loved it. I love Lewis and Joe of course. :P I wonder what's gonna happen during their date? You kinda left us hanging. :P Don't take so long to update the next chapter, okay?! :D
Loved the update! I'm so sorry for the delay in comment; you did a good job with it. Uh-oh, I wonder if Samantha's going to be okay? :o I hate cliffhangers, but now I can't wait for more, so please post again soon! Can't wait for more! :D Oh, and Happy Birthday! That's late, so happy belated birthday. :D
Loved the update! Sorry for the delay in comment. Great job with it, though, it was nice how Joe helped that girl out by giving her the money. As sad as it is to say, there are girls that young that have to sell themselves in order to put food on the table. It's pretty sad. So I kind of like how you kind of put the reality into the story. And hm... I wonder why Sam was sick? I'm sure you'll reveal that eventually. Overall, amazing update! Can't wait for more! :D
Okay, so... I finally caught up with reading this. lol. About time, right? Well, anyways, I absolutely LOVE this story so far! It is seriously... AMAZING!!! I like the whole plot you have going and the characters and everything. Well, except for the fact that I'm kind of wanting to change my name now... because the girl that broke Joe's heart name is Jenna... and that's my name too... but that's a common name, so... yeah. lol. Poor Joe, though, I don't like her for doing that to him, which is why I'm wanting to change my name so it isn't the same as hers. lol. Anyway, once again, this is seriously great so far! I can't wait to see what all else you have in store, and can't wait for more! :D Definitely... Subscribed! :D
Hm... so I'm beginning to think Joe might be exagerrating when claiming Denise blames him for Kevin's death. Because I mean... judging by the way everyone else is acting, she doesn't seem to be that way at all. If anything, she just wants to see him again. Maybe Joe just thinks this because he really just blames himself and is looking for someone else to hate him for what he did. :(
Either that or Denise displayed this side of her in front of him only. :/
Hm... and I'm starting to wonder about Jenna's intentions. Like, she tried apologizing, and even though it didn't work... she's still not leaving.
Great update, though. Can't wait for more! :D