Frame Of Mind - Comments

wow that was really interesting to read. The way the doctor talked about the patient really intrigued me, how he seemed detattched of emotion at that point of time-only meerely reflecting on his memories of his patient. As a sort of stating the fact kind of way. Really brilliantly written. Well done man. As always I love reading your style of writting it always intrigues me whenever you write something.

Aw! You had me so excited at the beginning of that, that it was going to be a continued story. You pulled me in with the exhausted therapist, and the odd, young man. I wanted them to help each other, and to learn from each other.

But, you are very good at your short stories. It ended so perfectly. A complete circle from what he had thought to what he realized afterward. I liked how the patient didn't even need help. He just wanted someone to listen. I often felt that way when I was in therapy. Like I just wanted someone who was paid to listen to me . . . Then again, I also needed someone to help me improve upon my mental illness, but that's completely off topic.

Great story, my dear. I really liked the characters you created, and the tone of the story over all. I juts wish it was going on.

Wonderful piece of writing.
I love the whole concept of the story.
But I have to admit I didn't really like the writing style.
There's a few minor mistakes and you change the tense once, I think.
Also I found some sentences a bit too long and redundant.
Besides all of that, I enjoyed this.
Nice work.

You know. how to write. And I'm not talking about flawless spelling and grammar, even though you slipped up a few times on that (like 'manors' instead of 'manners', if I remember correctly; and I think you misplaced/forgot an apostrophe), because that can easily be learnt and and those mistakes can easily be corrected. I'm talking about the ability to capture the reader's complete focus and show them a huge scope of emotion without using many words. And you're lucky to be able to do that, because it's so hard to learn, even if you have a huge motive for writing the story (like 'The Yellow Wallpaper', for example).

I love this. Very well written. You picked a very hard picture and I honestly didn't think anybody could pull it off. But you did, and you surpassed any expectations I had!

This is a really good story.
I love the character development, the detail, the emotions, the descriptions. It's really good.

And...Omg, I know you xD