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  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    A HEY MONDAY SONG!!!! :)

    Sorry, I saved this chapter to my favorites and didn't read it for a few days...and yesterday I discovered the EPIC-ness of Hey Monday, and I forgot what the theme song for this chapter was, and freaked out in the credits when there were lyrics XDDD

    So, I love how ya'll wrapped this up, and even though I'm not huge on slash...I'll check out the new one ^_^
    PS - my fave Hey Monday song is Obvious, of the ten I've listened to now. XD
    September 5th, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • Shadow Spirit

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    Noooo, it's over :( It's a good ending though. It's nice to know that things finally turned out good for Andi and that her friends and family stayed close to her when she grew up. After everything that she went through earlier is this story and the prequel, it's nice to see that she has found that her family aren't (all) as bad as she once thought :)
    Oh, and in the second-last chapter, I liked how realistic the dialogue was between Andi and Alex and how Andi's panic attack really showed how much she's miss Alex.
    Great job, you two :)
    I'll keep an eye out for your new story :)
    xxx
    September 5th, 2010 at 05:41pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    I still love it, despite the short and slighlty un-epic chapter. It was still good...just not long. =3

    Well, can't wait 'til ya'll update again...^_^
    September 3rd, 2010 at 02:15am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Still amazing, you guys! Loving it.
    Go Freddy, go Freddy!

    Anyway, can't wait for more!
    July 24th, 2010 at 09:30pm
  • Shadow Spirit

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    Another great chapter :)
    I love how Andi's realised that her life can be whatever she makes it and I really like the way that you've used the song to help her come to terms with that. It's great to see her finally realising that she can be in control and reclaiming her life as her own and at last looking forward to the future.
    xxx
    July 18th, 2010 at 05:33pm
  • raAwwrrosaurs

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    wow I'm slow at commenting... ANYHOW. what's wrong with the parents of your friend?

    I'd get a mibba anyway and just delete the history thing on the computer all the time...

    yeah right, love this^^
    July 14th, 2010 at 12:43am
  • Shadow Spirit

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    I think I was as relieved as Andi when she got that result! It's good to know that she won't have to deal with that on top of everything else...
    I love the little scenes with Paul- Andi's reluctance to open up seems really realistic and makes the whole story feel a lot more real. Likewise, her relationships with the other characters also help this :)
    Oh, and I also liked the flashbacks because they do a really great job of strengthening Andi's history and that helps to kind of justify how she is and reacts to things now.
    You've both been doing a great job with this- keep it up :)
    Sorry for my lack of comments- life's been busy but it's slower now so I'll be back to reviewing as you update :)
    xxx
    July 8th, 2010 at 09:17pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    She's NOT! She's not PREGO! Le GASP!!!!

    And your friend's parents suck - she can choose her own friends, and FYI: It's a story. Stories don't HAVE to have a basis in fact (although some do, and my parents seem to think they do, too. But they don't read what I write and I won't let them. Haha.)

    Anyway, I love the chapter. I'm glad Andi's not pregnant, don't get me wrong! And you wrote Freddy's reaction to Camden telling her well. I was scared that she was going to stay mad, for a minute!!!

    Lovely. Cannot wait for more!!!
    June 27th, 2010 at 04:44am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    That's so meaaaaaaaaan!!!

    Just me,but I think she is prego. Just because that's a maaaaaaaajor plot twist and, as I've learned, you guys love your plot twists. XD

    Lovely update, can't wait for more!
    June 27th, 2010 at 02:38am
  • raAwwrrosaurs

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    dude... why the cliffhanger?
    June 26th, 2010 at 08:40pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    OMZ there's an update =3

    I just told my friend that I hadn't got to read an update from this story in FOREVER, and voila! Here it is!

    If she is preggers...ugh. I hate her father. Hate, hate, hate, hate, hate with the passion of a thousand burning suns. xP
    But just her father. Not the story. Haha =3
    June 16th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • theperfectpirate

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    Don't procrastinate too long! I need something to write and the sooner you get your chapter done the sooner I can write my chapter! Hehe thanks yall(:
    May 22nd, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • theperfectpirate

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    Don't procrastinate too long! I need something to write and the sooner you get your chapter done the sooner I can write my chapter! Hehe thanks yall(:
    May 22nd, 2010 at 06:51pm
  • theperfectpirate

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    Don't procrastinate too long! I need something to write and the sooner you get your chapter done the sooner I can write my chapter! Hehe thanks yall(:
    May 22nd, 2010 at 06:50pm
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    Don't procrastinate too long! I need something to write and the sooner you get your chapter done the sooner I can write my chapter! Hehe thanks yall(:
    May 22nd, 2010 at 06:49pm
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    Don't procrastinate too long! I need something to write and the sooner you get your chapter done the sooner I can write my chapter! Hehe thanks yall(:
    May 22nd, 2010 at 06:49pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    Lovely freaking chapter!!!!!!

    Ahaha, My update is next, right? Oh, how long can I procrastinate?
    May 20th, 2010 at 10:55pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Bejeezus, ladies, you live to send me into shock.
    I should learn not to expect anything to go smoothly when you guys are writing it =3

    EWWW her brother AND son...EWWW!EWWW!
    I hate her dad.
    Loved the new chapter (as in the way it's written, not what I EWWWed over, lol. But nice plot twist - well, not NICE, per se, but...yeah)

    Anyways, Next time, ladies!!!
    May 20th, 2010 at 12:39pm
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    ...Two...months...oh, dear.
    She's not preggers is she?!

    oooh, this is getting good...
    Until next time!!!
    May 20th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • XxXBlackXxxXRoseXxX

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    Holy bejeeeeeesus! Have I actually not commented on the latest chapters? I just read through the chaps quickly and realized I'd read them all before...but I haven't COMMENTED?! AAAAAH!!!!
    Well, let's just say I am as in love with this as i was with the story that came before, and I eagerly await the next chapters =3

    "Sweet Anecdote, Man!" ... (couldn't resist...)
    April 25th, 2010 at 11:50pm