this story was amazing i spent my whole afternoon reading it. and now i have the urge to cry. if you were to write a sequel i think id be addicted.lol. great job!
SEQUEL...SEQUEL....SEQUEL!!! Okay now that, that is out of my system, this was such a great fucking story and even if you don't write a sequel, the ending fucking rocked! I liked how you ended it but it definitely ended in way that seems like it should be set up for a sequel. Thanks for the story though again, it kicked ass!
Awwww... I want to cry but I can't because I'm at school and people would laugh at me. :( Oh well. I think a sequel would be pretty cool. I loved reading this story and if you do write another one I'd like to see a little more of what Sen and Brian would do now that they aren't together. But that's just me, I'm quite sure that it'd be good anyway. :) good job!