Hiya, I really like your story, I only just started reading it a couple of days ago, but I think it's cool =) The new chapter (11) was interesting, one question though: how come it was written in present tense, when all the other chapters were written in past tense? Either way, it was still awesome. =D
I absolutely, positively love this story!!! Jack is awesome. Awhh.But i feel sorry for Kyle:[ Oliver is awesome but I want Kyle to be in it a little more.lol
These updates were amazing, I can't wait to see how the girls night goes, or the party even! Yippie!