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  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

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    To anyone that reads this:
    Could you read this story?? Its one of my friends but she needs more feedback cause she wants to send it off to a publisher. Could you spread the word around too? Thanks!

    Heres the link: http://www.mibba.com/story/polkadotq13/Sickness

    or click this: Sickness
    December 22nd, 2007 at 07:32pm
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    yeah. 8 hours and he is an FBI agent under cover. hes gathering information to charge her parents with child abuse. I think.
    December 1st, 2007 at 11:47pm
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    ~gasp~
    That guy has problems.
    I would HATE sitting still for 8 hours.
    December 1st, 2007 at 04:39pm
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    umm.. not right now...
    November 25th, 2007 at 11:02pm
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    Strip Club?!
    Evil People
    and who is the guy?
    Girl. Update. Now. Please.
    November 25th, 2007 at 10:59pm
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    ok I will...
    November 24th, 2007 at 12:47am
  • Rampage

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    eed more, mhhhm. I'd love you. Tell me when there's more :]
    November 23rd, 2007 at 11:55pm
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    Nice update! Her parents shouldn't really care whether or not she runs away. What happened to Josh?
    November 23rd, 2007 at 11:55pm
  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

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    maybe
    November 21st, 2007 at 05:12am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    Yay!
    Awesome Update!!!!
    more please
    November 21st, 2007 at 05:09am
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    sure. first I shall figure out which one this is...
    November 15th, 2007 at 07:32pm
  • appaloosa

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    oo i like this. very cool. more soon!
    November 14th, 2007 at 08:22am
  • Dreaming.:.:.Still

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    thanks. I hope its good.

    I am writing it a little differently then usuall. She is gonna have a hrad life.
    October 28th, 2007 at 06:06am
  • sinsa-4-eva

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    O.O
    man. She has a tough life. Lots of people do... :(
    I like this story. Well done!
    October 28th, 2007 at 05:33am
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