Fluoro Pink Braces and Black Tampons - Comments

LOL.
This is by far the funniest story I've read! XD
And first story ever? You have a gift, my friend. :D

“How many times have I told you, huh?!” Severus now grasped Lucius’ shoulders with his hands and whispered hoarsely, “Do. Not. Check. Out. His. Arse!” shaking him violently with each word said.

“Run, Voldy, RUN! It’s a tampon, TAMPON, TAMPON, TAMPON, TAMPON, TAM—“

Those two bits cracked me up laughing. XD
Excellent work :]

that was really good!!!

Holy crud.
There is NO WAY this is your first story. much better than mine. well done * claps*
Btw, the tampon thing was REALLY random.
I mean seriously, how'd you come up with that??

FIRST EVER STORY?

Fuck. I don't believe you- this work is exceptional for a first story! It's hilarious yet realistic- excellently parodied. I laughed so hard at the book title... And Dobby's "period".

Well done. Exceptional work.

Oh... *steals comment virginity*