Jerold's Magic Grapes - Comments

This was deep, man, deep.

I love it. XD

Hm, not really a fan of the layout.
Hahaha, this was cute! And funny. And just... lol. xD

Great story. I like how you've managed to make it flow like a fairytale, the language is really good and the description is excellent.
The ending wasn't what I was expecting, I think it was quite a creative twist. And I love how the pig went back to normal at the end with everyone staring at it in shock.

I never see...what would it be, fairy tales? On Mibba and I liked that. It had a surprise ending, very interesting and it was well writen, good language.

wow the ending...sorry it took me so long:) but I liked that.

That was probably one of the most interesting things that I have ever read.
It was very, very good though.

I love your language in this story, how it's simple but still strong.
I could picture everything quite clearly.
The description was great as well.

Really, I think this had a surprise ending, and I liked that.
I didn't think that the pig would go back to its normal size.
I was surprised.

This piece was very creative, and with no errors.
Fantastic job.