Freak Show - Comments

You really know how to write a good story :) I agree with WaayTooObsessed though. It would have been good to see Jessica again afterwards. :) <3

That was awesome and as promised, I am crying because I am a wimp. A absolutely brilliant story that's so beautifully written. All around incredible!!!! XD x

i loved it, it was incredible

wow, i didn't realize it had been two years until i looked at my first comment, and holy crap 2010 lol :p

well, that was a good story. i like that you included the part with frank's demise from dave's point of view. frank underneath was a human being, it just took some face carving and a castration to figure it out. poor guy lol :(

i was a little ehhhhhhhhhh with the ending. i knew you had to stick tomo in there somewhere, but i kinda wish we saw jessica again to see if she remembered or not.

can't believe this is over!! great job on it!!

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I'm not crying..... Oh damn it I am!!! That's do sad, and awesome. *sob* XD x

GRRRR. I want to read the next part so bad, this story is so good.

you're right, i wasn't expecting that lol. poor jessica, she didn't even have the strength to send jared home. now he'll be stuck on earth? hmmmm or perhaps they can find another person...

and the "freaks" tore frank apart? like actually ripped limbs from his body? :( poor frank :p lol

can't wait to finish this, please hurry!

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OMJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry for the late comment. i started student teaching on tuesday and i realize that combined with me going to school two nights a week is going to get rid of all my free time. but better late than never right ;)

so great job jessica. i thought she was saying all of that stuff on purpose to throw frank off, i didn't realize that she actually wanted to do all of it.

i'm excited for the next update!!

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oh jesssica why did u have to tell dave? Update soon

I have a feeling I might just cry in the end, it is just sooo sweet. Love it dude XD x

I fucking loved this story hope they get to stay together

sorry for the late comment, i've had a busy past couple days. anyways...

so i was a little surprised that frank didn't come in at all and interrupt this little session of theirs lol. i'm glad it finally happened but honestly how didn't frank come in or hear them? the way they both screamed wasn't covered so anyone could've heard...

but i can't wait for more!

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Well that was interesting I have a feeling their happy feeling isn't going to last. I kept expecting Frank to walk in and ruin their moment. I have no idea how this is going to end which is a really good achievement. I do hope Frank gets what he deserves. Can't wait for the next chapter

is there a way for him to remain a human and not return to his dream guardian role? that would be interesting.

i'm sorry, but frank was just too funny in this chapter lol. i loved his line when he commented on jessica rubbing jared's back. he's all like "that's not the only thing that'll stiffen, you gonna rub that down too" hahahahaha. classic.

that few left? :( how is this going to all tie together? i'm curious...

can't wait for more!

merry christmas to you too!

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It's soooo cute!!!! XD can't wait till next chappy XD
Adios x

Gaah! He told her he's in love with her :3
Yaaay, Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Please update soon :)

Sorry it took me so long to catch up #crazytimes still loving this story, sad its coming to an end but excited to see how it does...Last chapter was fab that Frank is a sneaky one but he kept his word and did not touch her, but will it last.....Keep up the good work hunni :D #loveit

this is a really good story keep it up

Frank is a tad bit EVIL!!! Jared and Jessica are soooo sweet. Can't wait for next chapter XD xxx