James - Comments

Some of the chapters are kinda short but I liked it, it was entertaining to say the least:D The last chapter was great though, it pulled the others together for a very nice ending^_^

Wow! That was really good. Espically the last parts about the children digging worms.

I didn't want it to end!!
But yeah it was good.

Could you read my story: Somber? I think you would like it.

great story! :)

i really think you'll like mine and a comment wouldnt hurt either :) here's the link: http://stories.mibba.com/read/172648/My-Only-Chance-Of-Survival-is-the-Guy-I-Hate/

keep up the good work :) :) :) <3