Spot - Comments

Wow, that was really good! I love how it was almost child-like the way you wrote it, but at the same time it was so morbid and... sad.

See Sally die. See Sam clutch Sally’s lifeless body to his chest. See Sam cry, his agony deep. Sam is sad.
I really liked these lines. Even though you just wrote that he was sad, it kind of had a better affect than it would have if you wrote it any other way.

Loved it. :]

brilliant. simply brilliant. woahh the spot one.. it was .. well it was simple but it had impact. you have amazing talent.

I adore the clever, cunning wit of suicide and homicidal ideas merged with the funny, "Spot," cartoons, and they all end tragic and indulgent. Brilliant is all I have to say. Wonderful.

The Way:

Fantastic.
Imagery, style, narration...

I'm subscribing, even if it's a oneshot, only because I wanna read it again.

Totall agree =]

I saw spot recced on the P&R thread, and...
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Oh my lord.
That was fudging incredible.
I've never read anything like it.
Just... wow.

OMFG; Spot is just such a FANTASTICLY written story. I love how simple it is, but at the same time so shocking. More like this. It's so nice to read something totally original.

Sharp and to the point; very dramatic. The perfect length for a one shot especially considering the subject. Love it. Extremely well written.

Fantastic.
Imagery, style, narration...

I'm subscribing, even if it's a oneshot, only because I wanna read it again.

Better review when I'm coherent.

Fan. Tas. Tic.

Umm... Wow?

:crazy:

That wa really good.
It seems to be well-written,
and I just love the plot.

(:

I really liked that, and i totally agree with how killing people in writing can make you feel better :]
I really did like this, good job!

me thinks this be well written:]

O= That's brilliant! I loved itt.

WOah, this is amazing. I want more!

This is... wow. This is really good. Really, really good.

Now I feel like killing someone too...
xxx