January 16th, 2012 at 06:23pm
Your saying my story isn't like others, I say yours isn't so cliche. I love your word choice, and the quotes at the end. The flames on the candle tips lick the air happily as they cast shadows on the cave walls. Like how you used 'the candle tips lick the air happily'.
When the devil wants to dance with you, you better say never,
because a dance with the devil might last you
forever.
Those lines made shiver. Like WHOA. It was creepy with the dancing and singing bones. I like creepy :] Sorry for such the long comment, but I had to share my excitement with you.
You're imagery makes me sway! You paint a beautiful picture.
I'm really curious to know where you're going to go with it, and I await eagerly for your next post.