Shattered by Broken Dreams - Comments

  • Johnny Christ;

    Johnny Christ; (100)

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    I agree with the comment above me.
    This was beautifully written and hilarious at the same time.

    “Don’t drink, don’t do drugs, and don’t get into bar fights. Don’t do anything I did that was wrong. And remember, as long as you have me in there,” he placed his hand on Sandi’s heart and a warm feeling bubbled through her body. “I’ll live forever with you.” he stroked her face, and suddenly was gone.
    This was about the time i started cryin :(

    Fantastically written, nonetheless!
    July 21st, 2010 at 05:19am
  • cruciatus.

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    This really made me cry. Cry I could totally see Jimmy calling God "Lala" and plotting on not being back in time. I thought that I had stopped crying, for the most part. But this...this made me cry again. It's very well-written, and I'm so glad I read it.
    April 10th, 2010 at 09:09am