Soria Girl - Comments

I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO BRENDAN DUDE SO MUCH.
Hell yes. Lovely ending!

About time those two got together indeed!
Gosh darn, this chapter was so cute and happy and... gah! Hugging :D

Crash was such a cool character. I did not see that coming, man.. Wow.

Argh, I cringed when he tried to kiss Soria. And cringed even more when she had to explain and... just poor guy, really. Written as nicely as ever, though!

Okay now I am starting to like Michael. But Ren is still better. And I love how this story has introduced me to Flogging Molly and made me love Gaslight Anthem even more<3

I can't believe I haven't commented on this story yet! I love it so far. I loved Renny Boy and I like how this one is more unforeseen to me (I accidentally read the first chapter of Soria Girl before realizing it was the sequel of Renny boy, so it sort of gave away a little of the story tehe). But anyway, Ren kicks Michael's ass!! xD

I thought Michael might be cool but that little cosying up trick he has going on? Not cool. And the whole touching-the-lower-back thing? Too far. But still, maybe he'll improve. Maybe he's just being nice and doesn't understand other's personal space. He has freckles, too, so I can't not like him as a character xD

asdiuydefohsadof, I love Ren and Soria. This is a very bad comment; I'm sorry.

Poor Soria, I hope she's able to over come her insecurities about being different. To be honest, she seems like such a grown up character to me sometimes that I've never thought about her like that. Maybe Travis will help her get through that? He's an awesome dude. If I were ever forced to have an older brother, I would want him to be like that.

One thing that I've thought of before, and more now that Soria has two military guys around her, is what she thinks of the military. Travis is away, I'm assuming stationed somewhere and I've been curious about what she thinks of what he (and her dad) does along with her opinions on war and so on. That might be something you'd want to include (if you haven't already) since it's a big component of her life.

Is Travis gay?!? Or are the boys just being stupid?
It's really nice to have some new characters and it's awesome to see how Soria reacts. You're talent for writng characters that are younger than you is amazing. Sure, we've all been there but I don't think many people could capture the real on goings of a 13 year olds mind as well as you. Especially because you're able to do it with a wide range of characters who all are completely different in the way they think! You've got real talent and I'm loving it!

&& Happy New Years!!

I love Brendan. He is the best. Well, not really, but that apology was strangely adorable.
Merry (late) Christmas!

Merry Christmas!
Brendan is such a hilarious (maybe a little slow but I'll forgive that, he's too cute) guy! Forgot his curfew, jeez. What a kid. That is such an awesome idea, this entire story is.
So Yay! Everything is all right with the guys. And Soria's feeling so much better about moving.
I'm all excited, moar plz.

Really nostalgic chapter. It's nice to be able to see some more of Soria's past. Hopefully we'll get more of the backstory in future updates. I also really liked how she came to her conclusion at the end that no matter what life goes on. I was sort of worried we'd be stuck in a funk for a while but I should have had known Soria wouldn't let that happen!

I totally want to read that one shot by the way.

How sweet! Ren and Soria are so cute together and I'm so glad he came back. Now I just hope Brendan makes his amends as well. I also want to touch on how amazing your lyrics are. They are simple but beautiful and show a lot of depth. I remember you writing something once about having written them all yourself? I'm just wondering if you've actually written the music to them too? I'd be totally interested in hearing the songs. And while I'm asking questions, how did you come up with the band name Plaster Caster? It's a really unique name and just fits the story perfectly!

Oh I can't wait to read about Soria in Santa Monica!

One of my favourite things about these characters is how they react to things in a really believable way. I feel so bad for Soria! Hopefully the boys do what Luke says and get over their anger so they can really say goodbye to her. I wonder if she'll find another band thing while in Santa Monica? That would be good for her. Plus we'll get to know some more about her and Travis? Maybe..? Oh so many speculations! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

After spending pretty much the last two days reading Renny Boy, I wasn't sure if your writing skills could prove to be any better. I'm in love Soria Girl just as much as I was with Renny Boy! You are an amazing writing, I could probably write a whole novel about how much I love this story. You change from Ren to Soria effortlessly and yet I don't feel at all like I lost a character. At first I thought I'll miss Ren's POV too much but I was proven totally wrong. I'd give a list of all of my favourite things in this story but that would take much too long. Every chapter has something that strikes me. Your characters are believable and despite their young age, appeal to audiences young and old! You are truely talented.

I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm totally hooked.

So I knew I said it was unlikely I'd comment again but... that chapter was just too damn cute not to deserve a comment! :3 This story is so far just as awesome as it's prequel - keep up the good work :)

Just like im not that girl, I read Renny Boy from start to finish without commenting once. I can't say why; I just didn't, even though it was awesome. I may not even comment ever again on this, we'll see how it goes. Anyways, if I don't, I just wanted to let you know that your writing is fantastic, your characters are stunningly realistic, your plots are brilliant and I love this series so far. So yeah, I'll be reading and enjoying, even if I'm not commenting. Looking forward to chapter two! :)

I love it so far!!!! Im wicked sad though that Sorias moving!!!!! AHHH!!!!!!!!

You're a good writer and I never commented on your other story... but I did on this one and you should continue to post it please. And besides that you get the joy of this being my very first comment on here!