To Jump, Perchance to Fall - Comments

Hey there, I'm your judge to Fangs Up's contest ^^
Wonderful writing! There was a perfect balance of imagry and action to keep the plot imaginable, interesting, and flowing. It was a little bit confusing keeping up with the different character, but I got it mostly figured out in the end.
I especially like how it's almost solving a mystery, trying to figure out what happened to her, seeing as you don't tell us outright. It leaves it open to interpritation, which I like. ^^
And, I also liked how everyone was a character from Grease. Theatre wins :D
Props to you ^^
~Icamane

:'( Been a while since I've read something that beautiful.

I wasn't supposed to comment the entries until the contest is over, but I couldn't resist(:
The imagery, vocabulary and plotline of this one-shot was absolutely stunning, my mind was blown.
This is defintely one of the best things I've read on this site(:

Jeeze, that was amazing.
I'm almost speechless after reading that.
I've probably said before what a wonderful writer you are, and this just flaunts your style so much. I was beautiful, and I'd be honored to comment on something like this. :)

This is amazing. really. amazing. I loved it! like, really amazing. ugh. i can't get over it!

AMAZING.

I love it.

I liked it very much, I think it gives the right feeling. Or rather, the story conveys what Gwen felt and what she wanted on a right level.