Screw Love; Hate's More Fun - Comments

Ok. It's well written, and I can feel the hatred in some parts, but some parts are hard to understand. There are times when I can't understand who's speaking to whom, or what the characters are trying to say with some of the anologies. A nice story overall, but it had a few flaws.

I'm assuming that there is supposed to be more to this. That or Cheye13 just decided not to write a part. Please let her know that she's got until the 28th to turn in her part if this story isn't finished. If it is, and she just chose not to write a part, then please let her know that she's screwed and not to even bother checking for her name on the list of contestants. She'll be one of the contestants that are eliminated.