Taste The Cream. - Comments

*read again* Oh my god. Babe, you're so... TWISTED! *giggle* Hehe, I really love this! It sounds really painful though..

Damn. This was so creepy and disgusting but incredible capturing! No matter how I shuddered at some parts, I couldn't click it away.
Summary = Awesome babe! :D

Poor virgin boy. I felt so sorry for him. D:

But oh Lord, girl. You're so twisted, and I love it. This is awfully perverted, twisted and just wrong and yet you didn't cross the line between capturing the reader in morbid fascination and slipping into gore-disgusting clicking the window away part. Which is awesome.

The sex part was a little... struggling for me at part, though. I'm not sure how to describe it, at some points it didn't flow as well as the rest of the fiction, but that might be just my own personal feeling. The fiction as whole worked really well in my opinion.

You rock, darling-girl! And thanks for the deds.