Don't Cry, It'll Be Fun...or Not - Comments

this is wonderful cant wait for the neext update

gah that was awesome!

wooohoo you updated!!! Omg the suspense is killing me!!! I cant wait for her to meet the guys and get kidnapped already! hehe.

I cant' wait for the next one. :)

I know its been a long time but i just found this story and i hope you update one day.

PLEASE UPDATE!!!

LOVEEE ITTT

usually im a silent reader but i really want u to update soon so...pleaseee updatee soon(:

I like!
I need moar, though. :c
MOARRR!

Woohoo! Love it n.n

omg loved the update!

Oo..she’s going to meet the band really soon.
Great update.

Nice chapter. Please update soon.

oh whoaa!
What's luke hiding????
did he kill him?

I like this story idea and can't wait to read more of it. :)

I liked the chapter.
But I don't think she should meet Avenged Sevenfold till the sixth chapter. Because that would be a BIG time skip thingy.....I think.....

I really Hope you update soon, it's an amazing story so far and i'm exited to see what happens next. Please update soon.

Very interesting story. Please update soon.

It's really good!

Seriously though.
what the fuck did he smoke though? O.o what kind of child would kill her father?!

update like right now.

So far I think this story is really great.
However there is a few suggestions that I'll make that really aren't necessary but might help you a little bit.
1.) Shorten the summary. Trust me, your summary is very good and it really drew me in, but there are parts in it that aren't really necessary.
This:

Now Sophie, who used to be outgoing and friendly, has become extremely reserved, when she's not being sarcastic. She wants nothing to do with anyone and her days of full of school, sleeping, and listening to her favorite band, Avenged Sevenfold.

can turn to this:
Now Sophie wants nothing to do with anyone and her days of full of school, sleeping, and listening to her favorite band, Avenged Sevenfold.

And just tweak a few things here and there. But again, you really don't need to do anything about it. It's just sometimes people get intimidated by lengthy summaries.

The only other advice that I'd give you is to space some of the paragraphs so that they're easier to read. Also they make chapters seem longer ;)

So great work, I like it :D

And again - like I've said a bunch of times before - thank you so much for helping me out.

Im in the middle of writing the next chapter right now so it'll either be out 2night or 2maro afternoon =) i also decided to start another story but that one is taking longer 2 get started so idk when it'll be out lol