How Samantha Deewas met MCR and Became Their Little Sister - Comments

aaaah i wonder what'll Gerard see in the vid D:

Ok i really started to like the way ur trying to go with this story but maybe u should have done some research. For example how would you feel truely if the woman u called mother for ur whole existence just up and told u u're adopted. I was hard for me to believe that anyone in the real world would react like Sam did.
So to clarify, i love ur story, but maybe put in some research time.

O-oh, this is going to turn out bad D:

dun dun dun. No Sam, it wasnt just a dream! lol.
Anyway, Happy Easter!

dun dun dun. No Sam, it wasnt just a dream! lol.
Anyway, Happy Easter!

Gerard kissed her? whoop, bad Gerard. I mean, she's his sister! Well, half sister. But still! lol.
This is getting interesting, btw. Cant wait for more!

totally awesome and haha cant believe that he got a little jealous of bob oooo update def soon

totally awesome and haha cant believe that he got a little jealous of bob oooo update def soon

aaaaw, that is one of the sweetest words i've ever heard for me! THANK YOU SO MUCH <33
i didnt expect you to say that, so i dont have any sweet words like that for you :( sorry! I feel bad.
well, keep writing my dear, b/c I'll always read it. You're one of my fav MCRfics writers. xoxo *cyberhugs*

You do know that not only is James Dewees (yes, you spelt it wrong) is thirty-five but, you spelt his surname wrong, right?

to have ittalics you put first then when you want it to end put a / infront of the i

lol awesome cake wish i could have one like that for me =( but definitely awesome uppppdaatttteeee

it's amazing that you still put Bob on this story :D
aaaw i want that cake!
more updates, yeah?

whoa cant wait to see what happens at the dinner lol update soon definitely

whoaaa gerard has a thing for her too?
that's interesting.
aaah cant wait to read some more!

Does that 50x35m bean bag really exist? Whoa.
O-oh, things are getting interesting here xD

Its okay...We can all get over bob leaving together!! Im sad also. But good update!!

Thank you for updating during this sadness :'(
I cant believe Bob really leaves My Chem. No more The Muscle :'(

Okay, your story hmm... where do I start.....
It's a good idea but you are going about it the whole wrong way, if you where adopted
One, you'd be absolutely pissed that you where never told, not giving your mother props on letting you find out on your own.
Two, women can rarely have children after their early forties so of course mid fifties would be out of the question.
Three, buying children over the Internet is not adoption, it is black marketing.
Four, wouldn't you main character be upset that her true mother and not want anything to do with her?
Five. if she was adopted how would her adoptive mother suddenly become her foster mother.
I honestly think you need to do some research, write up some temp chapters beforehand, the objective isn't getting the most chapters out, it's making sure the chapters you do put out captivate your reader.
Now this is just constructive criticism, but if you need a help for a editor just send me a line.

Oh. My.
that's what i said when i read the d*** length part.
haha.
well, more updates pleaseeee xx