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akanevampire19 (100)

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Really interesting! I want to know what Ben wanted to talk with Marcus!!! =D

May 10th, 2011 at 11:31pm

Charlie Brown. (100)

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Updates coming soon, just dont know when... :S

March 2nd, 2011 at 03:55pm

Goldfish Bowl (100)

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Always the truthful one Ailith! But i agree, it's really good!!!!! A bit sad for me but really emotional...
The dreaded green form!!!!! OHNO!!!!! But its soooooo sad!!!! Reading it makes you wanna cry!!!! ;)
You're such a good writer! You can make the reader feel every bit of emotion the characters feel
EG: The sadness and despair of the wife, the guilt of the husband and the innocence of the children!
really good work!!!!! Keep it up!!

February 18th, 2010 at 02:36pm

Kelhagen (100)

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Well, it's not the type of thing I'd read, but yeah it's good.

February 15th, 2010 at 08:14pm

Charlie Brown. (100)

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Thank you!!!!

February 15th, 2010 at 06:20pm

still waters; (100)

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She shook her head out of ym grasp
ym = my
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This is really, really good. I love the feeling of sadness of it all. You set the mood perfectly. It feels like I can actually feel the pain Anna feels, ya' know? That's really difficult to do to the reader, but you did. Good job. (:
You've got yourself a subscriber. (:

February 15th, 2010 at 06:08pm