I liked the third chapter. I thought it was kind of funny and I love Frank's sarcasm. Anyways, I like this and I think you should continue. You're onto somethin' here.
I love this so far. it's really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, really, good. :D Sorry about all the reallys, couldn't help myself. Anyways, please continue!