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This was very good!

I loved how you wrote it, and I loved how it was diffrent from most stories.

I like how you tied in the picture with the story.

I didn't catch any grammar mistakes, but to me it felt like it was moving a bit fast... :)

-Mockingbird; (cousins;)

I thought that this was beautifully writen; especially the finishing sentence (clause?) I, Sloan Vixen shed her childhood innocence somewhere between the ground and the sky.

A simple story that made me smile.

**Not the offical comment** but this is really really good. The only thing is the italics confused me at first, maybe you should but some flashback marker or something, but other than that it is really good :) love the story tittle idea and use of the picture.