Much Too Young to Feel This Damn Old - Comments

  • revelio.

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    Now, you say that you have trouble writing "happy" fics, but this one was in my opinion a happy one. Everything turned out okay and good. It's happy.

    Again, I'm not surprised but pleasantly welcomed by your writing style and varied sentence structure. Phenomenal.

    It felt real, like someone was actually reading the story to me, and it was playing out in my head like a movie. That's the kinds of things I absolutely yearn to read. Thanks for creating one (and many) of those.
    March 13th, 2010 at 10:00pm
  • dear pallis.

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    Help mee ! I'm speechless :O

    Hahah.

    Amazing. It's beautiful ! *_*
    March 10th, 2010 at 12:19pm
  • joonie.

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    This is so, so gorgeous. I love it was placed together. I loved the use of second person. It was placed together into such perfection. I'm amazed, honestly. You are genius.
    March 5th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • The Color Abi

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    Dru, this is just so perfect.
    I love the simplicity of the piece and how you wrote each and every word so beautifully.
    Reading your drabbles/one shots make me wish I could write as well as you can In Love
    February 18th, 2010 at 04:26pm
  • budgie

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    I love the simple style this is in, the short to-the-point sentences are nice and crisp and they give the whole thing a nice, terse feeling. The way you've crammed so much of his life into this is amazing, and it doesn't feel rushed or unexpanded or anything and it's so beautiful.
    February 18th, 2010 at 01:11pm
  • emaciated idol

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    That was beautiful, I cried. I loved everything about that, and I'm sorry that I suck at anything other than high praise :-]
    February 18th, 2010 at 06:09am
  • Melly Belly.

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    I love how in the end everything is okay and he's happy. I hope that's how it really is for Ryan.
    February 16th, 2010 at 10:21pm
  • folie a dru.

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    Ficlet.
    ~500 words.

    Happy[?] reading!

    And thank you anyone for any comments that are left.

    xoxox
    -Dru
    February 16th, 2010 at 02:03am