Now, you say that you have trouble writing "happy" fics, but this one was in my opinion a happy one. Everything turned out okay and good. It's happy.
Again, I'm not surprised but pleasantly welcomed by your writing style and varied sentence structure. Phenomenal.
It felt real, like someone was actually reading the story to me, and it was playing out in my head like a movie. That's the kinds of things I absolutely yearn to read. Thanks for creating one (and many) of those.
This is so, so gorgeous. I love it was placed together. I loved the use of second person. It was placed together into such perfection. I'm amazed, honestly. You are genius.
Dru, this is just so perfect. I love the simplicity of the piece and how you wrote each and every word so beautifully. Reading your drabbles/one shots make me wish I could write as well as you can
I love the simple style this is in, the short to-the-point sentences are nice and crisp and they give the whole thing a nice, terse feeling. The way you've crammed so much of his life into this is amazing, and it doesn't feel rushed or unexpanded or anything and it's so beautiful.
Again, I'm not surprised but pleasantly welcomed by your writing style and varied sentence structure. Phenomenal.
It felt real, like someone was actually reading the story to me, and it was playing out in my head like a movie. That's the kinds of things I absolutely yearn to read. Thanks for creating one (and many) of those.