Sundaes - Comments

When I clicked on the title, I was like ‘yum’. I love the short summary and thought it was cute.

Then I click on it and I love the banner and layout. They’re both very cute and fit nicely.

I love how you describe the food and the color. I adore little details like that. I’ve always thought that it showed the author really cared about their writing.

The ending is very cute. I actually didn’t see it coming, but it makes sense; Katie constantly asking if Marie wants anything else. Very adorable.

I really liked this. I didn’t see any mistakes, which is always a good thing. This was a very cute one - shot! Oh, I feel like I should mention that I want ice cream right now. Haha.

This is so sweet, and so pure.
It's simple, and I think adding in anything else would ruin it.
I love how you began and ended it with a single word of dialogue.
I could sense their relationship, how natural they were around each other from just a few words.

Beautiful, baby.