Aw, yay, an update! Loved the new chapter! :) Gosh... I just, LOVE the idea for this story, and just... can't get over how much I love it. lol. Maybe it's because I like fight movies, lol. But anyways, great job with the update; you kind of made it suspenseful at the end there with Damon getting stabbed! :o I wonder if he'll be okay? :o Can't wait to find out, and can't wait for the next chapter! :D Glad to hear you won the Bring Back Mibba Award! You deserved it! :D
Yay! You updated! Loved the new chapter! :) I'm still... in love with the plot, lol. Really. A little brutal at the beginning... since Nick took a beating, but that made it more... interesting. And so did the end, with Monroe being there. Gah, I just love your writing! lol. You're such a good writer; and the chapter was well written, and that's not up to your usual standard? I can't wait to read a chapter where it is; because I thought that chapter was amazing. Okay, lol. Overall, great update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
Wow it's about time haha jk jk Awe I feel so bad for Mackie :( It must be hard to have that guy so close to her and then having to go to dinner with him :P Update soon please :)
Okay this story is love, seriously! <3 And now I can't wait for the dinner part with Monroe, but I think he's got something up his sleeve that might just tick me off :( Anyways, update this SOOOON, Kim. Loved the chapter. :)
So... I just found this story, and I decided to read the four chapters of it that you have posted so far... and I absolutely loved them! This story is amazing so far, and I hope that you continue it. :) I love the idea you have for it; I think this is the first story I've read like this on Mibba. The plot is definitely unique. :) I noticed that you haven't updated in a while, and so I hope that you choose to write some more and post more for it soon. I can't wait for more! You are seriously a fantastic writer! :D Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Definitely... Already... Subscribed! :D
I hate Damon! and hes only just come into the story lmao! But Nick was awesome in this chapter coming to protect Mackie that was really cute! It would be quite interesting if Damon did make a move just like @FlyWithMe;; said i want to know what Nick will do! But awesome chapter can't wait for the next updat :D
Okay, I officially don't like Damon, at all. I kinda want him to make another move on Mackie just to see what Nick will do haha :D Update soon please :) :)
Nick, how sweet of him to defend Mackie that way. =] And thank God Grayson is outta the picture but now we got Damon. urgh. will the sleazbags ever go away? anyways...I can't wait to read the next chapter! so if you can update soon! =]