Halfway Gone - Comments

WATCH YOUR BACK!
That's freaky.
So is getting hti by a brick.
Nick should claim his love for her when he comes into the hospital room.
I miss Nick <3
But otherwise, awesome chapter :)

Damn Kim has got some bad luck... thank god you didn't kill her though
or I woulda come down there and pummel yo behind missy!
Haha, but no seriously... this chapter was great, it gets better and better with each chapter I think.
Update this like seriously soon :D

Loved the update! Way to make it suspenseful at the end. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please! :D

Wow her moms kind of a bitch lol

SNAP. this cannot be happening!!!!!! noooo :(

This phyco leaving messages is freaking me out!
And those police officers seemed very iffy to me
Update soon please :)

Oooooo creepy! I feel bad for Kim, she's lucky she has Nick around to help though. Update soon!

She seems very insistent to talk to Nick... :P

ok so this line confused me a little...

Nick let out a sigh of relief. “I was hoping you’d say something like that,” he admitted. “It wouldn’t be right if we didn’t forget about it.”

where he said 'it wouldn't be right if we didn't forget about it.' doesn't he mean 'if we didn't remember it.'? or am I just interperting it wrong?

anyways, I loved the update, I can't wait for the next one =]
oh and ps. Don't kill Kim. please please please.

Awe man! i find an awesome story like this and I end up at a chapter that's left with a cliffhanger.
Gosh darn it.

It just means you'll have to update soon.(:

Anyway, this really reminds me of a book. I used to be into Goosebumps, as lame as that sounds, but only the awesome mysterious ones. ha. My favorite was The Babysitter... or something like that. Anyway-this reminds me of that. I mean, it's obviously not the same, but you have a girl trying to figure something out with a boy. I don't remember the plot exactly, but I'm so happy I've found this. I love it.

I usually just read full on romance stories, but finding one about a murder mystery with Nick Jonas just makes my day. haha. I love it--don't know how much more I can say that.

So I really hope you update soon.(:

Loved the update! Oh my gosh, how could you end it like that?! Update soon please, I want to know what happens! Will Kim be alright? I want to know! lol. Can't wait for the next update! :)

Oh my god!
that was so scary!
update soon, i need to know what happens to Kim

agreed with fairly predictable. i couldn't have said it beeter (:
please update! i can't wait to see what happens to Kim! & i HAVE to know what the note said(:
good job!

Oh my gosh! What's gonna happen to Kim?!
And what did the note say!!??
You must update soon please!!

OhhhCLIFFHANGER!! Its getting inetresting!! Please UPDATE :D

I really like how the story is progressing. The character development is also a very important part, and you've done that exceptionally well. I love everyone is suspect. I'm starting to feel suspiscious about Ivy, and Rosie's ex (his name escapes me). The plot is turning out very, very well; and I cannot wait to read more. Keep up the good work! :]

OMG UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

Gawd you've gotta stop killing people off xP jk, this story rocks and you need to update soon

That chapter was freaking unbelievable! Jeezzz... you can't let me, well yea me die!
I'll kill ya!! FARRR OUTTT.
Incredible.
You are so talented, and this chapter was sooo great!
I loved it!
Update, like NOW!!! :D

LOL at connor's comment hahaha.
Ohhhh man this story is sooo great!
You are such a talented writer Mackie, and this chapter was fantastic!
I hope Kim and Nick sort this stuff out... the suspense is killing me!
More soon. Like NOW!
Kidding, but no... really. :D ahaha