March 25th, 2010 at 07:05am
Wow. Amazing. Really. This is unlike any other Jonas Brothers fanfiction I have ever read. Actaully, this is unlike any fanfiction in general I have ever read. The emotion and suspense of this just makes me what to read more and more. It's like a book that makes it impossible for you to want to put it down, except this isn't a book and I have to wait for the next chapter, but you get what I mean, right? Usually, this would be where I would tell the writer what I think they should do to make their story better or what they should watch out for, but I can't really do that for you because I can't think of anything like that to say. No story is ever going to be perfect, but as of right now, I can't think of anything wrong with it, so I'll just leave you with this: I am really loving this story so far and I can not wait to read more!
-Shawnee
PS, I would have commented the last couple of chapters, but I completely forgot to subscribe, but I'm going to be doing that right now, so expect to hear from me again the next time you update.
Because that's how much I <3 you and this story.
And it's freaking amazing.
I <3 Nicky. And Kimmy. And their relationship.
I mean, ''friendship''.
;D