The End. - Comments

This was just... I was moved to tears. My eyes were wet as I got to the end. I really, really like this. I'm happy that you won because you totally deserve it! :)

this was amazing, so descriptive you could be there at his side
you most definitely deserve the win
(and more comments, too)
might have to recommend this to a friend (:

OhMyPancakes! That is SO good. I LOVE it. You're an amazing writer. I love all your work. So keep posting more please x)

This is so good. (: I'm glad you won that contest, 'cause you deserved it.
It's amazingly descriptive and absolutely wonderful.
I love the way you write, and the layout is rather lovely. :D

From the Last Day On Earth contest! =D

Wow! GREAT entry! =D
There's something about it that I can't quite put my finger on... I think it was the perspective of it. And how a lot of things were blissfully vague. Like, you didn't completely understand what was going on. But that made it more enjoyable to read. And I love how you never mentioned the names of these two men. It was very tasteful how you described their relationship and how character A lived in so much regret after an incident in which character B died.Also, I thought character A was going to kill himself. But it was actually the end of the world? Damn. Aha did not see that coming.
Beautifully written. Wonderful imagery. <3
Only criticism I could possibly have is how the layout doesn't relate to the story. But that would be nit-picking. Aha
Amazing entry. Love it. <3

Thank you for your entry! Results should be posted sometime this week. Good luck!

Wondeful story. I shivered a little, it was great. Amazingly descriptive. :D

Oh, and I was wondering what the layout had to do with it. It was still pretty!