Broken Down on Memory Lane Alone, Together Alone - Comments

thank you very much for updating! I love it!
heehee I've had similar dates...quite fun XD
love the songs!
I like the random checkout guy checking her out, he's my new fav ;)

I think... I think I really liked this because of the characters you've created... I mean, they're believable and I kind of want to meet them. It's creative and different from anything I've read on here. Love it! :D

I like IT!!!!

Lovely update as usual.
I love The Cars, they have to be my favourite band ever...

;]

:D I LOVE IT!!! more!

hmm sonny and dravin in a coffee shop together....I'm rooting for a fight between them while Mara and Dravin's grandson get together...

I'm agreeing with InTheFlesh. That was a sweet chapter.

What do Sonny and Rainn look like now? I know there's a character page but the pictures are small and me with my glasses can't see :3

I'm watching Nick Clegg make a fool out of himself and I just pictured him in the story being laughed at by Sonny. ._.

Update soon :)

That was just the sweetest chapter.
I wonder why they broke up...
I'll find out soon enough.

Your updates always make me smile. :)

yay update!

Ohohoho. I loved this. The chapter was really sweet and the 'go steady' bit was brilliant. Proper lingo from them times if you know what I mean. A few spelling mistakes but nothing I can't live with.

it's a shame you didn't update sooner, I've been losing my love of writing since most of the stories on here are so damn stupid.
Anyway, I'll leave you on the note of your brilliance.
Keep it up!

I'm back!
I'd read the sister story <3
Well, the only mistake I saw was "shoe's how much attention I pay,"
Sometimes, you use a different word to the one you were meaning to put.
Like..put and but, shoe and show, door and floor. So word won't tell you what you've done wrong.

Anyway, I loved this update and I'd like another one soon.

I'd LOVE a sister story about Fright Night! I might even marry it. Or, get some sort of polygamous thing going with this story and it's sister.

But anyway, loved the update. Writing mode Rainn, ftw!

good update, bashing justin beiber is always good. one tiny thing bugs me though, its conceited not conceded, sorry.

Back again <3
I agree with everyone here actually, including myself.
You deserve a highfive for that Justin Bieber comment :P
Haha, anyway, I love how it's written. One or two spelling mistakes around but I don't care about that, and there's a good chance no one else does.

Anyway, haha, uhm, yeah as I always say; I loved it I adored it and you should update soon.
Plus, it should be taken through to the end, even if it's only say... twenty chapters. It would still be well worth the read :)

Awwuh, I wish I could see that movie!
Can't wait to see what happens next weekend.

xoxo.

yay updates updates I love updates. The story is progressing in interesting directions too.

I adored this.
It was really sweet and I know I say I adore your chapters every time I comment but I really do.
You're very welcome by the way.
The fact that this has no plot/plan yet makes it really interesting. I'm curious to see where it goes and I want to stick with it until the end of the story.
I agree with myself. As smug as that sounds. But I had forgotten what I'd said previously and this really is fun to read! I can't stress that enough, it's so different to the usual 'emo' stories and Justin Bieber romances. I mean it.

So, please do update soon because this story is so sweet, different and indescribable. (Although I just described it, but not to the best extent that I could have.)

I'm back! You're welcome <3
I enjoy commenting on this because reading it always makes me smile.
Not one hundred percent sure on where it's going either, making it more fun to read because it's so ruddy different :3

Oh, and update! SOON!