Someday, You Will Be Loved - Comments

This is my favorite DCFC song ever, ever, and I am glad I found this song. I was listening to The Ice Is Getting Thinner just so that you know how obsessed I am with Ben. I also found that you had a different opinion of what the context of what the song meant and that is refreshing. I will recommend this!

I loved it! And I liked the little story about the coin. And also the way you described what she was feeling. Some advice:
instead of telling the reader how she felt, show it.

but yes, it was great!
Well done!