You Lost Touch When You Became Fake - Comments

This is deep. It has meaning and it is the caniving truth.
I liked this, and I liked how you expressed/used your words in this, it was simple, yet it had meaning. :D

-High school, full of everything that batters your emotions, eventually turning you into an emotional wreck, if your not on top of the ladder. I loved that line. Full of meaning. I like the way you express your feelings about high school, teachers, friendship and specially bullying. I know what it is like to lose a friendship because of popularity. I still don't get the satisfaction of bullying... what the? The way you make your point in teachers bullying students too is amazing! Awesome

Wow, Kayleigh. I'm going to tell you that was pretty dang good. I've never known what people think about their grade in school. They don't really talk about it as detailed as this.

These are the kinds of things I look for in a one-shot. Detail.

Was this in your point of view of high school? Because I noticed how you said you were 11 in 7th grade and 13 in 8th. You told me about your school thing to, so I was like 'is this about Kayleigh's school' and stuff.

It's really good otherwise. Thank you for doing this!