Amazing idea. "The fire starts eating you up and you perish into the flames" That would have been a painful and beautiful sight. Not beautiful as in pretty but beautiful as in hauntingly, deathly beautiful. I love the back ground. I really liked the way you used the title as the ending.
Hehe, first off, yes, I did hide from that sex scene. It's only natural for me. I don't feel comfortable reading those kinds of things because, well, it's an odd thing, in the first place, and two, it's like peeking in some body's window and watching that. It almost feel impolite to do that. xD If that makes any sense at all.
Anyways, what matters is the parts of the story that I got such a thrill out of reading, which was anything but the hiding scene. When his house was set on fire I felt like I was burning a little too, more emotionally than physically. And that part where he just scratched the name out, killed me...
You are evil...
I love it!!!