Florescent Adolescence - Comments

haha, this was funny.

and I thougt it was cool how you had Sometime Around Midnight and Heads Will Roll in that order, that was the order I found them in last summer :D

Well first off, I should start by saying that I know absolutly nothing about Shaun White, execpt that he won the gold for the US at the olympics. He has mad boardin skills! Haha.
So I thought I check out your story, since I kept seeing Shaun stories around. Your the first one I read :) AND I LOVE YOU. ha...

Okay so I love the characters. I have no clue if Louie, Mason and them are real people like Shaun, but I absolutly love them. There so hilarious, like Louie. Haha poor Louie can't get a kill. You killed it when they asked him if he wanted a dog, hahaha. I also think Candace is a pretty good catch. When I started the story, and her and Shaun were in the closet, man it was so funny!
I pretty much fell in love with the idea of Shaun finding out his best friend liked him. I was really pissed off when he pretty much blew her off, then kissed her. Then he went and got shit faced, HA he so deserved his hang-over. But I was thinking that maybe he got shitfaced cause he was confused and scared..and I was like..yeah he probley likes her too, and he does! Then when Mason had the idea of Scotty and Candace to go out, ha that was awesome. I love Scotty. I was kinda liking him more then Shaun for awhile...for ALOT...maybe still do...I'm not even sure anymore XD

You made the story really enjoyable. I don't read much 'comical' stories...well I haven't recently. But I loved how you made me laugh almost every chapter. Like that when him you quoted the torrets guy, and well you just had a lot of funny quotes and shit in your story. I couldn't stop laughing!

Loved the story, I'm going on to the squeal RIGHT NOW!
And by the way THE ARCTIC MONKEYS RULE!

*bitterly cries* PORQUE?!?! PORQUE?!?! How could you leave it like that? Now you know that Candace and Scotty are still going to be together just like Shaun and Natalie are. It's not cool!! I'm deeply saddened by this even though there is going to be a sequel. Yeah, Scotty is the shizness right now. Shaun...not so much.

I can't wait for the sequel!!!
It's going to be just as amazing I'm sure!!!

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i am subscribed and ready to go for the sequel!!! EEEEK! i can not wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shauns whole plan is ridiculous and I dislike it. It's him using her in a sense.

OMGGG!!!!!!!!
You are incredible.
You finished a story in like a month!
And I feel special because I think I convinced you to put it up....
But I don't remember....
:/
oh well
yayy!!!!

Uhm. I love you. :)

*tear* I can't believe it's over.
Cute ending though...i don't mind scotty as much anymore.
I'm still uber pissed that Shaun and Candace didn't get together yet.
*sigh* In due time...
Can't wait for the sequel!
Best story I've ever read!!!!!

lmao a raptor on crack<3.
you make me laugh a lot. :)

I think you should start the sequel soon, pal. :D
the fact that the douche that has my name makes me feel like a whore. thanks.
lol

seriously their relationship is EXACTLY like my brother and his ex girlfriend except for the fact that they were once together but know they will get back together, get married and all of the other stuff you have in this story.. it's kinda creepy how similar it is haha!
I love it :]

Aaaaahh snap, so much anger. I liked it :D
I wasn't sure whos side to take in this chapter 0_o
I'M SWITZERLAND :D
Can't wait for the update

Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!! *runs around screaming and banging head against the wall* THIS CANT HAPPEN!!!! I'll kill Natalie if it'll make Candace feel better. Okay, so maybe she's being a little self cetered and hypocritical, she does have a valid point on the virginity. Then again Shaun had a valid point with Scotty. I think i might cry. You see what you've done to me?!?! Not cool!!!! They can't be mad at each other! They're best friends! They're supposed to get married to each other for crying out loud!!!!!!! I don't even know who's right anymore. *throws towel to the floor* I give up. I'm out of here *leaves* *comes back* I'm soo hooked to this story that I have to know what's going to happen next. It just can't end with them being mad at each other. If they stop talking to each other and the sequal starts off with them not being friends, I will probably cry. Update please!!!!!

HOLY SHIT!!!!

*tear* poor candace, i think she should really just get over shaun cause he obviiously doesn't care about her that much anymore :P
cant wait for more ♥

Loved it
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i absolutely can not wait until the sequel!!!

I read this tonight and fell in love with it. It's so good! Plus, for some reason, it makes me really adore Scotty for some reason. Lol.