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  • Elizabeth Darcy

    Elizabeth Darcy (100)

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    I like it. It's simple but paints a really nice picture in your head.
    It left me wanting to read more, find out what happens when he comes.
    Nice work.
    March 20th, 2010 at 09:52pm
  • Converse Addict

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    nice. I like the layout, the simple imagery, and how exact you were
    February 19th, 2010 at 05:10pm
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