August 2nd, 2011 at 09:34pm
I am sooooo sorry I took so long. I got to chapter ten and I am continuing after I finish the comment.
I like your writing style, very natural and easy to read, but that's not the most important thing to this.
I am sitting here literally trying fight back tears (mostly because I am at work) because I relate to Megan too damn much. And Justin, he seems so much like my boyfriend it's not even funny. I mean, I'm not cheating on him or anything related to this story, but it just sets me back to the fact that I'm going through some real shit with him now. It's like it's me in the story and I am speechless.
I think this whole story is one of the most moving to me exactly because I am going through something similar.
I love this story because of that and I am glad I read this because you got me seriously thinking now. Thank you.
I love your layout, it's really pretty.
Also love your title, it drew me in.
Now onto your story
This has a nice concept to it
A very promising plot,
Everything is nicely explained, not too little nor too much.
I kinda wanted the summary to be a little longer but sometimes shorter is better
Depends on the story content and stuff.
I can't wait to see more from this story
Also can't wait to see more stories from you
Keep up the good work
<3