Escape From This - Comments

I really like this. It's brilliantly written and the characters are really awesome - especially Lottie. She seems like a very interesting and cool character. Actually, I've never seen another character like her. I also like the names you've chosen for your characters. It makes them very unique (:
Also, I love the descriptions in the first chapter. Some people aren't very good with settings and descriptions, but you have a great knack for that :]
You have a wonderful story here. Great job!

This was very well written. You have a lot of characters and it is hard to describe what all of them are doing, but you seem to have a talent for it. I really like the names you've chosen, too. Especially Lottie.

I've heard it before, but I'm not sure from what... Anywho, you have a wonderful story here. The only thing that threw me off a bit was the layout. Other than that, this was amazing.

Your writing style's incredible. I adore it.

I must say that I didn't like how small the text was, but the immense detail you put into the story made up for it.

I'm going to read more, for sure, but I'm commenting on the first chapter - one shot swap, in a way.

The wording is just incredible, I have to say. I wish I could write like that - I can occasionally wax poetic, but never pen a whole story in it.

Thanks for the reccomendation, I'm enjoying it. :)

I love the way you write. Your style is awesome.
But I do have to say, I am very confused on what is going on.. haha.
But it is very good, and entertaining.

This is good :D
I love your wording and everything. :]

I like Randy lol. And Jack is an awesome name, fo' sho'.

More soon? Yes, please!

luv it! Can't wait 4 more!!! XD

What's Russel's problem? He needs to stop being a doucher. That would help lol.

Update soon!

I like it! I'm interested to know what will happen with the alternate world. That's what it is, right? Anyway, update soon! :D