Wonderland - Comments

Okay, so I finally read it :O
I like it. Hope you update soon[:
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That was good:)
Update please.
Did you like the movie:
Alice and Wonderland?

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“I’m Tweedle Dee, he’s Tweedle Dum.” The one on the left said, pointing to his – what Alice assumed to be -- brother.

“And contrarywise, I’m Tweedle Dum, and he’s Tweedle Dee,” the other said, copying the former's movements exactly.

Alice stood in amazement. She was both confused and intrigued by the Tweedles.

“And what might they call you?” they asked in unison.

“Alice.”

Both twins cocked their head to the side and stared at her for a great deal of time, making Alice feel slightly uncomfortable.

“Do you happen to know where I am?”

“You are here,” Tweedle Dee said.

Or was it Tweedle Dum? Alice pondered.

“And there,” the other said.

“How does that--?” Alice decided to not ask them anything more. She figured she would never get a straight answer from either of them.

This was my favourite part of the entire chapter. I always liked the Tweedles and I was curious to see how you would portray them. You did a good job. I still really love this story, more when you can :D

Loved the chapter! I can't wait to see where this goes, it's awesome so far :)

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“What can we do with it?”

“Can we do what with it, do you think?”

Okay, I love how you made their wording xD That's great.

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Both were wearing the exact same thing -- torn-up trousers that barely passed their stubby knees along with black and white striped shirts that were dirty beyond belief. Alice examined their clothes more closely and saw patches on either side of their pants where holes must’ve been covered. The clothes weren’t the most interesting part of these men, though. She stared into their big, round eyes and saw complete darkness. There appeared to be no other color than black in their gaze toward her. The eyes seemed to match their oddly shaped heads that resembled a circle, but not quite as perfect.

IT'S BILL AND TOM--
*shot*
xD

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“You are here,” Tweedle Dee said.

Or was it Tweedle Dum? Alice pondered.

“And there,” the other said.

I like the line in the middle, it sounds like something Lewis Carroll would have written :)

I'm excited for the rest :D
I want to see your take on it.
Especially the white thing that I don't remember the name of right now X___x

This is so... supurb. Yeah, the tense changed a little bit, I noticed, but it flowed nicely and still held that aura of mystery. I love that. I simple cannot wait for the next update... *cracks whip* GET GOING! :D *that was a joke* XD

I love this story! I've been on such an Alice binge lately with the soundtrack and movie, so this is going to be awesome to read! Plus I love TH, so this combination makes me happy :)

FINALLY, INEZ.
Geez xD
Agh D: There were a bunch of tense changes and verb disagreements and in a second,
I'll send you the beta'd version, because my red pen is aching xD
BUT. The chapter was still good.
TH wasn't in it yet so it was a bit like watching the movie, so I can't wait for them to come in :D

I want to see Tomi's chapter and see how she writes this xDDD

This is cool :)

Firstly: YAY SOMEONE'S COMBINGING TWO OF MY FAVOURITE THINGS INTO A STORY WHICH I'M ABSOLUTELY POSITIVE WILL BE AMAHZING.

Secondly: I love the way you portrayed Alice. Her innocent thoughts, and the way she spoke... and Gustav, hurrying along that alley. I could just imagine it. And what you said in your little author's note, this is like a work of art. Already. The way you wrote it, the images in my head already, even the layout.

I simply cannot wait for the next update. More please :3

This is really good! :D
update sooon please!

I love it! Alice in Wonderland has always been my favorite so I'm so happy someone is finally writing about it with Tokio Hotel in it! That just makes 10 times better! (:

Update s o o n?

I wonder what coming next to poor poor alice
if you put a cat I feel like I might stab it I love cats but hate the one n alice in wonderland

It's 1.53 a.m. and I'm fucking tired so this won't be super long xD But it will be somewhat long.

I really like how innocently you portrayed Alice. As a girl who's kind of a Peter Pan type character. One who's, like, never wanting to grow up. The way you wrote her thoughts was really neat. I can imagine her at the club, standing off to the side and not wanting to get drunk or anything xD And I love how this was all set in modern times, too.

...even though you told me it was Gustav who was the White Rabbit, I still pictured Bill because of the trenchcoat he wears in "Spring Nicht", which, while being über sexy, is still black and I shouldn't have thought of that. But yeah. Gustav would look epic in that coat.

Gustav's late for a very important date .__.

Dude, I'm so excited for this. I can't wait until you guys post this.
I wish the cheese smiley worked on here.
Because that's what I'd do.

Inez, you whore, you still have to work on that Kyle XY story with me xD