Bloodied Straightjacket - Comments

I really like this, but I have to say that it's a bit vague. Maybe you could describe a bit more of his emotions? Does he have major psychological disorders that could cause sudden anger and frustration? Is he doing this only for the thrills? Things like that make the story more realistic. Overall, this was great (:

I haven't read much of your work, but you have a very distinct style, miss, and I love that about your writing! Your stories are different and unique, and I loooooooove that!

My favorite part was when he was counting down. The first chapter is really well-written and I will eagerly be waiting for more!

Good job! You definitely grabbed my attention from the first sentence! :)

Amazing. As always.
Though in a horrible kind of way and I'm not sure if I'm ready to see where this is going.
But I'll definetly subscribe.
Because, as you might have realized by now, I'm completely addicted to all of your stories.

No problem, chick. This seems promising.

Wow. That was amazing. You put emotion into it, which is always good. I like it.

Really well written. There are a lot of similarities between this and a story I just finished called The Stopwatch. You might want to check it out. It's really uncanny in some parts.

Now for the review I gotta say I loved how you managed to build a full psychology on a paragraph. The writing was very fluent and although it was short it does feel like a chapter one, not a prologue or an introduction. Which is good. I like when things just start without much prelude, it makes it intriguing.

I have no right of telling you where to go, especially since you seem to be quite talented, but I would enjoy it if you opened the next chapter with his breaking out of prison. Let this work as a character entry and begin telling the story from there, maybe express some of the paranoia of the media and society as the find out this killer is loose. It has potential for a long run, keep it up!

Hope I was helpful :D