Between Want and Need - Comments

ohyum!
that was amazing. lol
you are an amazing writer.
now i'm off to read more of your awesomeness. <3

i loved it =] and weird part about it is because i was listening to stand up and scream then hey there mr. Brooks started to play when i was like in the middle! It too bad this is one shot, i would love to read more. So please consider!

Little sister, I tried to read the whole thing. I reallllly did.. But, It was SO weird, thinking that Shawn is almost 31 & Danny is only 19. I gave up when I got to the sex. Hahahahhaha. I love you! XD

OHMIGOD.
I just realized.
Between Want and Need.
(BREATHE ELECTRIC FTW!) :)

OMNOMNOM.
>:D
-Wiggles Eyebrows-
Toldja it was gonna be hot.
xD
Lmao.
And ohhhh boy... >:D
(I'm such a pervert...x3)
You did a fantabulous job :D
Thanks for finishing it so quickly. ;)
Good luck!<3

:)
L-O-V-E-D this.
It's was pretty damn amazing, and hot.

Great job and good luck for the contest.
:D

OHOHOHOHOHO.
First comment, for the WIN!
Anyway, I kinda freaking loved that.
I got completely hooked right around here:

“Do you mind if we go back to the bus really quick so I can change?” Shawn asked.

I shook my head. “Not at all.” I smirked, then added, “but only if I can watch.”

*grins* d:
Your past/present tenses were a bit off here and there... You should try and work on that.
Other than the few mistakes here and there, great job. [x
Oh, yeah. And good luck for the contest. :D