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  • han jisung xx

    han jisung xx (100)

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    ohyum!
    that was amazing. lol
    you are an amazing writer.
    now i'm off to read more of your awesomeness. <3
    December 1st, 2011 at 05:48am
  • Modern.Sunshine

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    i loved it =] and weird part about it is because i was listening to stand up and scream then hey there mr. Brooks started to play when i was like in the middle! It too bad this is one shot, i would love to read more. So please consider!
    February 10th, 2011 at 01:28pm
  • restingplatypus

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    Little sister, I tried to read the whole thing. I reallllly did.. But, It was SO weird, thinking that Shawn is almost 31 & Danny is only 19. I gave up when I got to the sex. Hahahahhaha. I love you! XD
    April 7th, 2010 at 11:06pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    OHMIGOD.
    I just realized.
    Between Want and Need.
    (BREATHE ELECTRIC FTW!) :)
    February 20th, 2010 at 07:05pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    OMNOMNOM.
    >:D
    -Wiggles Eyebrows-
    Toldja it was gonna be hot.
    xD
    Lmao.
    And ohhhh boy... >:D
    (I'm such a pervert...x3)
    You did a fantabulous job :D
    Thanks for finishing it so quickly. ;)
    Good luck!<3
    February 20th, 2010 at 07:04pm
  • miss monti

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    :)
    L-O-V-E-D this.
    It's was pretty damn amazing, and hot.

    Great job and good luck for the contest.
    :D
    February 20th, 2010 at 11:45am
  • november rain;

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    OHOHOHOHOHO.
    First comment, for the WIN!
    Anyway, I kinda freaking loved that.
    I got completely hooked right around here:

    “Do you mind if we go back to the bus really quick so I can change?” Shawn asked.

    I shook my head. “Not at all.” I smirked, then added, “but only if I can watch.”

    *grins* d:
    Your past/present tenses were a bit off here and there... You should try and work on that.
    Other than the few mistakes here and there, great job. [x
    Oh, yeah. And good luck for the contest. :D
    February 20th, 2010 at 10:54am
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