Wishing on a Superstar - Comments

Well written. Very short. Let's one's mind wander and wonder.

Short and sweet. It was well wrote but I think you could of play more with the idea. Good job though.

ooh, i like it! :)

That was really interesting to read. Just before the competition, should 'could' be 'count' in the second last paragraph? And 14 could be fourteen. But other than those minor errors, I really liked it. Different. Hopeful.
Good luck in the competition.