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  • clsteinhoff

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    Well written. Very short. Let's one's mind wander and wonder.
    March 8th, 2010 at 05:17pm
  • PhoenixAngel

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    Short and sweet. It was well wrote but I think you could of play more with the idea. Good job though.
    February 23rd, 2010 at 12:48am
  • darkeyedreamer

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    ooh, i like it! :)
    February 21st, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • An open space

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    That was really interesting to read. Just before the competition, should 'could' be 'count' in the second last paragraph? And 14 could be fourteen. But other than those minor errors, I really liked it. Different. Hopeful.
    Good luck in the competition.
    February 21st, 2010 at 06:58am
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