Bittersweet Life - Comments

I usually comment on lj instead but FOCUS ON JACK AND ALEX! with side chapters of zack and martin :))

Oh wow! I'm so sad this is over but I totally loved this chapter <3

As I said once, I would like the sequel to focus on Zack/Martin, but I'm sure it would turn out to be good anyway (:

and i missed your question about focus. i think both of them have too much potential
for another good story. xD so i think one with both of them as a focus? with zack/martin
with a bit bigger of a role. maybe switching off focus in each chapter?

Aww.
I like how you ended it with both couples dealing with the prospects of new families.

As much as I like Alex and Jack, I think the sequel should focus on Zack and Martin. Since they've finally patched things up and seem ready to adopt, I'd love to read about how it all goes.

I loved this story so much :D
It was beyond awesome, a sequel focusing on Zack/Martin would be sweeeeeet

I think that you should focus on both. = )
I can't believe its over! I loved every minute of it!

okay, that was one of the greatest stories i've ever read. xD i'm sad that it's done!
and your summary for p.s. - i love you did not please me. D: if jack and alex break
up, i WILL cry. just letting you know that you will be the root cause of my unhappiness.
i can't wait to read the sequel. c: amazing story. <3

Hahah, sexual favors(;
And, yes! do a sequel.
<3

I'll cry if we don't get a sequel. :]

Update faster!!....lmfao..i love this story of yours!!...Lmfao

“Trust me. I’m not letting you use the stove ever. Besides, you can make it up to me in other ways.”

“Oh yeah?”

“Yeah. Sexual favors, you know?”
Yes, after that you are most definitely obligated to give us a sequel!
Plus, I love this story too much to let it end. = )
I LOVE IT!

Definitely a sequel!

WOW!! I don't think I have words to explain just how much I LOVE this chapter. It was amazing!!

I can't believe this is ending! I hope you do a sequel! It would be so cool! You have such a talent! You are an amazing writer

I loved how Jack called Cayden "ours" It really shows how strong their relationship is!
And a Martin/Zack chapter would be epic!

HAHAHAHA. I love how you ended that. xD
I bet a million people have already said this, but...
LIKE DUH WE WANT A SEQUEL. :3
If you can/want to do that, that is. x]
Because, well, I can't believe this story is ending. D: D: D:

You should have some more Jalex sex before you end it. I wanna know what those sexual favors are. [;
Hahahaha, I sound pervy. xD Seriously though. d:

Lol. Anyway, I can't wait to hear the Martin/Zack side of what's going on now.
I mean, they're moving in together already? Awww. :3
Speaking of 'aww's, that chapter was extremely cute. [x

So... yeah. Update soon? :0

hell yea sequel!!! love this story

Ooooof course we'd want a sequel!
I'd even make you a banner or six for your sequel!
The only reason why I didn't this time is cause well, you had one already. XD

I would probably die if there wasn't a sequel.

This is sooooooooo good. I'm a total supporter for a part two. :D

I would very much like a sequel but you know.. like one that foucs on Zack and Martin!

anyway, i really like it!

I still can't get over how lovely I think Jack, Alex, and Cayden are. They seem like such a cute little family. Same goes for Zack and Martin. It's hard to believe how much everyone has grown over the course of this story.

It goes without saying that I'd love to read a sequel.

Awww.
I would LOVE a sequel to this :D
Thanks for updating <3