Bittersweet Life - Comments

Well well well.
Late night in the laundamat? Well absolutely nothing can become of that...
Yeah... sarcasm isnt easy to really sort out over the web... sorry.

This story keeps me guessing. I want to know what happens next but i have no ideas. Welll its up to you! =)

aw thats kinda sad... but the story seems great so far!!! UPDATE SOON!!!

Your stories are all fantastic =]
They're well written, and relating to the characters is easy, especially when the chapters are written from their perspective.
I'm totally subscribing to all of them xD

I really like this story so far and am looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for updating =D

Yay, some background info to go on! It all m.akes more sense now! Woohoo i cant wait for more!

I'm in love with this story. It's just pure amazing. I love what past you gave Alex, it's perfect for the storyline. I can't wait to see what happens next with this story.
I absolutely adore Zack's character he seems a complete sweetheart.
And, I feel sorry for Alex, tbh.
Also, I like that you've made Jack the kinda "dismissive" sort of person, I think that really shows how different Alex, Zack and Jack are.
And I think it proves the age differences, kind of, too.
I'm babbling. I apologise. I just loves this so much, from the un-developed idea I sent, you turned it into this. Wow.

It's my favourite story I'm following at the moment, I've got to admit.
I really can't wait for the next update.

I'm really excited to see where this is going! XD

ohhh i really like this!
Can't wait for more
x

WAITTT, WAIT WAIT WAIT.
I did not see that second chapter! :0
Oh my goodness, seriously? THAT's how they met?
THAT IS FREAKING AWESOME. I swear, you come up with the best plots EVERFREAKINGEVERR.
O.O I'm officially in love with this story.
Like, seriously. It's different from the rest of your stories.

Zack's usually the most adorable - and suddenly he's this? WHOA. Love it - like I said, it's different.
And Alex is cute here. d: AND IT'S A JALEX. WOOOOOOOT!
::teehee: UPDATE SOON! ^^

WHOA! I loved that. *grins*
Zack, a manwhore?! Are you serious?! MAN. Did not see that coming! xD
That means you surprised me yet again - that means you're awesome. ;]
Hahaha. xD Seriously, though? Alex and Zack's relationship is so... ambiguous, here, if that's the right word for it. Hahaha, I can't think of any better word right now, so yeah.

I sound high. I sincerely apologize.

ANYWAY! Loved the start. Very unique prologue, I'd say.
So... next chapter up soon? :D

*writer
*your
stupid typos.

Ohwellhellothere
amazing
story
write
I read new perspective, if you didn't know
and I saw
in you authors note(s)
that you would be writing a jalex
and I was going to search through your stories for it
but then I got lazy and figured
imma do it later
and just recently,
about ten minutes ago maybe?,
I was searching for a jalex to read
and then BAM!
I open up this and then
BAM! again
I see who's writing it and
BAM! for the third time
it's you and then
BAM! for the forth time
i realized you were the same person who is writing new perspective and then
BAM! for the fifth time
I love that story and then
BAM! for the sixth time
I realized that THIS was the story I was gonna look for earlier and then
BAM! for the seventh time
I love this so far and then
BAM! for the eighth time
I had to comment and tell you.

And after a series of more BAM!s to come,
I should subscribe.
:]

So, I love this so far. You've got me completely hooked.
I already love Alex-- I'm still terrified of thunderstorms, too. ><
The only thing that bothers me is that you don't spell out numbers, but it's so little that I'll just ignore it.

I'm looking forward to an update ^^

Wow.
Alex and Zack met under quite interesting circumstances. Although it didn't under ideal circumstances, it's nice to see that Zack has a heart and Alex has a home.

As for this Jack business, I'm anxious to find out what will transpire.

aw..i feel bad for alex...jack doesn't even look at the poor boy
man, i would think it would be awkward to live/work with a person that you slept with for money..eek

Well if that's Jack, then he needs to slow down and look around at life. Stupid businessman :P
Great update!

Im kinda confused and i want to see what happens
Im subbing and will wait [in]patiently for an update.
I think that so far this has been written really well. Its great. =)

I'm excited for this story :D
If your ther stories are anything to go by then this should be amazing

You had me hooked once Alex's fear of thunderstorms was mentioned.
I'm subscribed and excited to read more.
:)

I can't wait, I really like this so far.