Lord of the Underworld - Comments

Hah that was funny. It had a very good comedic side. I hope you do well in the contest. :)

The concept is great and I love how you added in that Hermes was the culprit. There are few spelling errors here and there as well as grammatical errors, but nothing big. Over all it was a pretty good story and I hope do well in my contest as well as the other ones. Normally, I would have told someone to write a different story or just use the current one as their entry, but this was too good to make you do that. Good luck! <3